Akira Daisuke(Re-edited and finshed)

Basic Character Info

Name: Akira Daisuke

Age: 1786

Visual Age: 22

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada

Number: 1(Secretly the cero espada)

Aspect Of Death: Insanity

Mask fragment location: left eye

Hollow Hole location: Center of abdomen

Espada Tatto location: Located on the left side of his back but also written on his espada jacket.

Appearance: When people take a look at Akira they see a slender/muscler teenage looking boy with long blood red hair flowing in diffrent directions as his ruby red clear eye gaze upon his oppents and partners or maybe at the bone fragment on his left eye with a evil twisted postion. When there not look at his ruby red eyes they are very likely looking at his large horns sticking out of his head and curling back like the horns of a ram representing his time as a vasto lorde. While his head and face catch peoples attenion some also notice his arrancar jacket and pants with the number 1 on the right of the jacket showing that he is the primera espada and when he would unzip it would show a gaping hold in the center of his abdomen giving a creepy feeling stating that something in his life has happened there.

Personality: Despite his hidden villainous personality and position of authority, Akira is a surprisingly polite, soft-spoken intellectual, often addressing his subordinates by their given names. He rarely shows any sign of alarm or distress and often has entire situations planned out well in advance. Whenever confronted, Akira is casual and uncaring, attempting to draw out a conversion and make small talk, which often infuriates the one he is talking to. Not only that but Akira's anger and rage are mostly still pin up inside of him making him stay secretly dark and evil inside of his black cold heart.

Background/RP Sample

Background: Akira was born in the world of the living in about 1967 to a merchant father and a house madien mother where he was well loved by his parents where they saw him as there pride and joy but other kids where hateful and mean to akira for being so smart and haveing a good household and about at age 11 burned his house to the ground killing his mother and father leaveing him orphened and forced to live out on the streets where would constantly be beatin nearly to death by total strangers. When he was 13 akira made a chance to jumped off a bridge hopeing to end all his pain and suffering but was stoped by a girl named akiho who really liked akira and did not want to see him day a death like this as they looked into each others eyes they suddenly kissed and had each since that day that nearly ended akira's life. When akira was in high school at age 15 a freshmen he was constantly picked on for being so skinny and tall and they had giving him the nickname tall ass and no one would ever stick up for him except akiho and she would always get in trouble for sticking up for her boyfriend which the bullys gave him another nickname which was pussy which slowly hidden quietly building up rage and anger in akira.

As akira's high schools spead by he soon found out that he was a senior and was about finsh in 2 days as he kissed akiho goodnight later that day after they got back from a movie he encounter his normal school bullys as they did the average everyday stuff pushed him shoved him and mocked him then went about there night but little did they know that something bad was going to happen real soon. Graduation was the next day and as it was to be expected akira was the valedictorian and the kid that got the most scholarship offers to the most smartest schools in the world. As akira stepped on stage for his speech to the all the people in the stadium on the football field his bullys showed up and threw tomatos at his hiting his all white robe and calling him a pussy and a pansy all kinds of evil nasty words but akira just took it and finshed his speech and stepped back into line with his class.

As it was said that they had finally finshed high school they threw there hats into the air and as soon as that happened akiho came and kissed him long and hard but as soon as they finshed the bullys came up and grabed akiho and started feeling her butt and breast and pinning akira to the ground and made him watch as they did that to her but sunddenly akira started foaming at the mouth his muscles got bigger and his eyes started to roll back as if he were going crazy and suddenly a crazy evil sadistic twisted smile and laugh came out and as the bully was telling his boys to going pinning akira his neck had been suddenly slashed open by akira riping out his windpipe and the blood flowing all over akira's face laughing insanely. As the bullys only watched as there friends neck fall out akira got up and started laughing and saying you wanna play games as he charged and slamed one of the bullys heads down the ground cracking his skull open and instantly killing him on impact only to akira this was the best damn thing in the world to him and with a evil twisted smile he looked at akiho who only passed from the fact that she can't beleave he was doing this and killing these kids. Looking at the fallen akiho akira only laughed and grabed the remaining bullys neck as he was begging for akira not to kill him akira laughed harder and put his hands under his rib cage and yanked out three of the kid's ribs and shoved them up into his head going through the guy's brain and onlaughed as the police shouted to akira to put his hands up only to not to do so and steal one of there guns and blow his brains all over the sidewalk with that same evil sadistic smile on his face as his body layed ther with his brain all over the sidewalk.

As a soul wandering the ralm of suffering of pain he was in he encountered a bunch of hollows which so became there dinner and instantly he turned into a hollow with a vast amount of spiritual pressure which scared other hollows and made them flee from him which he would hunt them down like the dogs they where and just consume them till there was not a single bit of then left and with in no time he became a mindless menos grande. As a menos there was nothing much he could think about but to only consume and destroy other meno's as he much as possble and with about his 100th meno he turned into a adjucha. Haveing become a adjucha and regained his intelligence he made thought out plans and traps to catch hundreds of adjuchas and feasting on them and walk among there oceans of blood as that was the only path before him but after years of killing over 1000 adjuchas akira could feel something happening to him that he did not know what to do or expect and comeing to the fact that he thought he was going to die.

But on the other fact he was really changeing into something more powerful then a adjucha and by the time of his 1500th adjucha and a little of the menos on the side he suddenly was engulfed in this strange power as his mask started to change his body,hair,height and power and suddenly a huge cloud of smoke surrounded akira and surrounding the smoke 200 menos and adjuchas but suddenly they heads all fell to the ground and a big huge lake size amount of blood started to rain down on akira clearing the smoke revealing a slim long haired lean muscler akira as he had become the extremely rare class of menos a vasto lorde the strongest menos class. As a vasto lorde akira only roamed the forest of meno's killing anything he encountered but the same year he had a a hard fought battle with another vasto lorde nearly loseing he was so tired of beeing a hollow always fighting always killing he tried to rip off his mask hopeing that would kill him and with all the strength he could he broke the mask off his head watching it fall to the ground but since there was such a big strain on his body he passed out he never got to see what he looked like without it. Akira had awakened in a strange room with at the end of the bed that he was placed in he saw a brown hair brown eye man with a smirk on his face looking at akira with a intent of usefullness he asked that how did akira managed to just rip his mask off with just brute force but he said that it did not matter anyway.

As the strange keep talking to akira he asked his to look at his new face as akira got up from the covers and looked at his body revealing all of his parts arms,legs chest even his privte parts but he was still shocked by all this and then the man asked if he would like to join him in conquering all of the ralms ever and the only thing akira said was what do i do sir with a evil twisted grin. As the strange man told him the plan he told that he would become the number 1 but really he was to be the cero and that he was the only arrancar that had become one without his help which made him stronger then the rest of the other arrancar. Now the number 1 Akira just basicly roams las noches thinking about whats gonna happen today and whens he gonna get some tea from the meeting since he really liked the tea but in the inside the old him wanted to come out and have play time with all of the espada.





RP Sample: (This fight is gonna be the untold story of akira vs the old primera)

Akira approached the first espada's headquarters with a emotionless look on his face as punched the door clear down falling to the ground making the 1st espada leap to his feet and see who it is revealing it to be akira.

,"Who in the blue hell are you buddy",the 1st said looking at akira with a angered look try to scare akira off.

,"Your death",akria said calm as possable not to attract attenion to himself and bring in more espada to back him the number 1 up,"today is the day i become the new number and the day you get blown into not but ashs and scattered into the wind",akira said with a ferm look at the number 1.

The number 1 only laughed at akira statments and threats,"my death! blown to ashs are you sure your not mistakeing that it's your death",the number said smileing as he charged a cero strong enough to completely destroy the 6th espada in one hit,"die you piece of shit",he shouted as he fired his orange cero at him.

Akira unimpressed only stood there as the cero can rushing at him and twisting and turning and only inches from him akira grabed the cero with his bare hands and completely destroyed it with just a squeeze of his palm,"is that all you have because if so then you can just roll in the grave right now because this is gonna be a real short fight",akira said with a cold tone in his voice with still no emotion in his voice.

The number 1 only looked at akira in shock as he could not beleve he stoped it but with his bare hands and look completely unharmed in anyway,"how could you do that theres no way what are you",the number 1 shouted in fear with the fact that he really might die.

Akira only looked and then his smile turned into that sadisted smile that comes up when his blood is pumping and he's about to kill his prey,"you better use your release because im only giving you one chance if you fail again then ill kill you with my cero hit with your best come on you coward",akira demaned wanting to see what this guy could do.

The number 1 only looked as if he had met the devil himself and with out thought he used his resurreccin,"appear rayzo",as the number 1 appeared in his resurreccion and charged his ultimate attack,"el rayzo cero", as he charged a blue and red cero and fired it at akira,"this will do it",the number 1 said to himself.

Akira only saw the cero comeing ad then he sonidoed above the cero only to look at the number 1 in complete shame,"so i see you for what you really are nothing but weak worthless lump of meat", akira said as he appeared behind the number 1.

The number 1 eyes open wide as a botton and with the sudden thought that death was only a foot away,"please don't kill the spot is yours just don't kill me please", the number 1 begged as he got down on his knees.

Akira only looked at the defeated arrancar in pure shame,"as a arrancar your just a piece of shit and now your nothing but dog shit",as akira said blasting his cero into the number 1's head leaveing noting but his body without a head just clean as day as if the number 1 never even had it. As akira looked at the fallen number 1's body he only could just shake his head and sit in the number 1's chair in his room.



Innate Ability

[All hollows come with innate abilities, what’s yours? I.e. look at Nel's Cero Doble, that's an innate ability. A closer look at innate ability is something that is actively passive throughout your character or activated by the character itself.OPTIONAL and will be closely monitored.]

Name: Instant Absoluto regeneración(Instant Absolute Regeneration)

Description: Even though some espada have regeneration they can not heal internal organs meaning if there where to get cut down the body would heal itself but the organs would be lost explained by ulquiorra when he fought ichigo in his vasto lorde form. However Akira has the ability to instantly heal his internal organs and limbs if they are damaged or destroyed so that even though they are destroyed or cut to shreds they instantly come back unharmed no matter how many times they are destroyed. But the only thing he can not heal is his brain if his brain was destroyed then he would die for sure.

Resurreccion Information


Name: Dios(god)

Release Phrase: Smite them dios

Element/Family: Light/Holy

Represent: Arch angel

Sealed Resurreccion: A normal zanpakuto with a star shaped guard and a white handle with yellow trem going around the handle.

Released Resurreccion: As Akira releases his resurreccion the sky begins to rain down yellow spiritual pressure and a bright white light surrounds akira almost blinding the enemy. As the light clears and things become visable again akira's body had turned very light tan and his hair went from blood red to bright sliver with his bone fragment on his eye disappears revealing his other ruby red eye with his white wings unfolding from his back spreading out like a new chick learning to fly as the wings spread the whole surrounding area begins to burst and break from the spiritual pressure making creators and rocks lift from the ground as his eyes turn white with a black ring surrounding it with a glare so intense that it can make the thoughest shinigami trimble in fear. Not only does his body change but his personailty changes from the calm soft spoken intellectual into the crazy sadistic evil twisted personailty he use to have then becomeing Akira the angel of light.

Resurreccion Special Ability: In his ressurreccion Akira can create yellow and white energy lances,spears and daggers then can even turn the most threating enemy into nothing but another target.

Segunda Etapa is restricted for ANY characters below Primera Espada.
Segunda Etapa Information
Appearance: When in segunda Akira is engulfed by a hoarde of flying hell demons and pulling him into hell as he transforms. When Akira appears again a black and white smoke starts to disappear around Akira. When the smoke is gone Akira is shown hold his broad sword and his hair is waveing and blowing as it appears to be jet black almost blue. While his hair is long his body has buffed up making his muscles twice the size they were before . His body skin goes from a light tan to a pale white as his body is almost as white as snow. While he is pale Akira's eyes turn jet black like that of a great white shark's eyes when you look at them.

When in segunda Akira's wings become all black with a hint of stained white in them symbolizeing a fallen angel. And if his wings are not enough he gains a satanic body armor as it covers his upper chest but showing his abs still. Covering his shins and elbows but leaveing space to where you can see his muscle defineing. As all this attracts your attention he also has a cape made up of pure darkness that flows wildly and can also protect him.

Segunda Etapa Weapon: Akira when in his segunda etapa gains a long fearful black broad sword which weighs weightless to him. Because this he can swing it at extreme speeds but when the enemy picks it up the weight becomes 500 tons making it impossable to be picked up by anyone else. Also when swung it lets a huge blast of red condensed spiritual pressure in the form of a wave or beam. And the sword can instantly repair itself if broken in tiny pieces or turned to dust as the sword is a part of Akira himself.

Segunda Etapa Ability: Little is known about Akira's abilitys due that he has never released infront of anyone though he doe's regain all his strength as vastoe lorde. Maybe it is even greater then his old hollow powers but it's unknown. Though this form is never been revealed before to anyone Akira will only use it if he has too. The ability is that Akira becomes the complete opposite of his light ressurection. He becomes dark and embraces everything that is darkness he then become's Akira the angel of darkness. Also all of Akira first ressurection abilitys become enhanced and turned to darkness abilitys with the addition of new ones.


Techniques

Name: Lanza de puro ligero(lance of pure light)
State: Resurreccion
Description: Akira makes a giant lance out of his spiritual pressure and can hurl it at his enemys and if it hits anything it would explode on impact destroying the surroundings.
Duration and/or cooldown: Instant

Name: Cero violento
State: Resurreccion
Description: Akira fires white cero the can be fire instantly with no warning or signs it just appears and fires 10x the strength of a normal.
Duration and/or cooldown: Instant

Name: Mil Lanza de puro ligero(1000 lances of pure light)
State: Resurreccion
Description: Akira fires one giant lance into the air and cause's a explosion so big that it rains down 1000 lances.
Duration and/or cooldown: 6 posts

Name: Puro ligero explosión(pure light explsion)
State: Resurreccion
Description: Akira fires a condensed super blast of light that is big enough to put a hole a creator size hole clean through anything it touchs
Duration and/or cooldown: 3 posts

Name: Puro Oscuridad Explosion
State Segunda Etapa
Description: Same as ligero explosion except five times as powerful and black.
Duration and/or cooldown: instant

Name: Mil Lanza De Puro Oscuridad Explosion(1000 lances of pure darkness)
State: Segunda Etapa
Description: Same as the light verson except five times as powerful
Duration and/or cooldown: 2 post

Name: Oscuri Angel Rain
State: Segunda Etapa
Description: When Akira opens up his wings he fires a deadly shreded blast tiny pieces of spritual energy that when it makes contact sets off a huge explsion. Each blade has the ability to explode makeing dodgeing almost impossable.
Duration and/or cooldown: once per topic.

Name: Oscuridad
State: Segunda Etapa
Description: Akira gathers every piece of darkness around him. From the shadows to the black sky or even black colors he forms all of this into a condensed form spiritual pressure. When condensed Akira releases it a powerful nuclear blast explosion totaly destroying anything caught within 5 miles and turning them to nothing but dust.
Duration and/ or cooldown: once every 3 topics.

Name: Oscuridad Vastrea Shield
State: Segunda Etapa
Description: Akira makes orb type shield out of pure darkness that can defend from most attacks and kido/cero
Duration and/or Cooldown: Instant


Name: Speed of the immortals
State: Any form
Description: This ability is a advanced verson of a sonido that Akira has created himself this ability is the same field as teleportation. Though this is rarely used when used Akira can go anywhere in the realm he is in, So this gives him teleportation.
Duration and/or cooldown: Instant

Cero: Akira fires his Cero from his chest. As light-heartedly noted by the strange man, unlike other Arrancar, he can apparently fire a Cero without a "fighting pose," meaning he can fire one instantaneously, or without any warning or having to charge and focus the energy for the Cero with a body part like other Arrancar and Hollows


Gran Rey Cero ((王虚の閃光, (グラン・レイ・セロ), guran rei sero; Spanish for "Grand King Zero", Japanese for "Royal Hollow Flash") is a powerful and potent variation of Cero, it is only permitted that Espada level Hollow are use it.

Bala: This technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it like a bullet from their fist

Sonído Master: Akira's skill and speed in Sonído is so great that it seems as though he possesses a form of teleportation as he moves in the blink of an eye, simply "appearing" solidly instead of shimmering for a second like other Sonído users.

Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Akira has demonstrated immense skill in swordsmanship, being able to fight on even ground with the other top espada and defeating them.

Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant: Akira has shown to rely mostly on hand-to-hand combat, rarely drawing his sword at all.

Garganta: Garganta is how Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Akira has the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. He is seen using one to travel to the fake Karakura Town.

Immense Spiritual Power: As one of, if not the strongest Espada, he possesses tremendous spiritual power. Akira is forbidden to release his Zanpakutō inside of Las Noches, as such a release could destroy the fortress. His spiritual energy is yellow. As a Hollow, he was apparently unintentionally killing other Hollows just by being near them even after splitting his spiritual energy.

Highly Perceptive Combatant: Akira has demonstrated an ability to be very detail oriented when it comes to fighting. He notices his opponent's mannerisms and discerns with ease the reasons behind those actions and the weaknesses and strengths of his opponents. He is also able to look at unfamiliar attacks and figure out the way they work just by viewing at least once.

Enhanced Hierro: In his Resurrección form, Akira has proven himself to be highly resistant to both pain and injury; after taking a direct hits from high level captains immense attacks in his life and crashing into the towns , he was seen lying practically unharmed amongst the rubble while uttering only a half-hearted "ow" in response to the attack.

credit to bleach wiki for the help.

Im not sure if this is my place to do so, but i see something wrong with your app already.

Your Techniques, they're pretty good. Make a Cooldown. For all three. If you're primera, then of course your abilities will be good, but being able to use all of those instantly and without a cooldown seems a little.... a little god-moddish.

Also, for your abilities, this isnt such a big deal, but edit them. Edit them to the point where it wouldnt be completely obvious that you ripped them from Bleach Wikia haha.

Also, your Initiate Ability: Being an Arrancar, you're just a Hollow that has gained Shinigami Appearence(somewhat) and Shinigami Powers(somewhat). But if your brain were destroyed, it wouldnt be able to tell your heart to beat, or your body to regenerate itself. So add in there that if your brain or head were damaged (head because you may suffer brain damage) that it would effect your body to at least SOME degree.

And your Resurreccion, add more detail to its appearence.

Also, im not sure if Alfonse would agree with me, but if you're going to want a position like Primera, then i would say you should explain that picture in depth. You're going to be given a high position, and it'd be best if we wee exactly what you're capable of.

I see on your template it says "Done"?

Well once again, you're not getting Primera without going the extra mile. Add to your descrptions... All of them.

Break your history into noticeable paragraphs, and i want to see some good work with your appearence, and your personality... Oh come on, sweet jesus lol - Do you think that personality is sufficient? Add a paragraph or two to your Existing descriptions (excluding personality and appearence).

For personality, i want to see alot more than what you have. Alot.
Appearence, no.... No No No... You're not getting Primera with "Avatar". Nuh-Uh. Work on your appearence. Make. It. Good.

Mmm....

You've done as i have asked, and i approve, but im not approving your rank. I'll leave that to Alfonse.

I approve of the rank. Your Primera, act like it.